Sprite-harvester's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Puppeteer: page 9]

leave leon to do the unpleasant work.

BTW Aronkong, you can get you're accounts deleted if a mod figures out you're using multiple accounts to lower the score of a submission or are just spamming it.

also the story is getting interesting. What's she doing with those souls :?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

...
i am so happy~
i can;t wait
i am working on the next page right now... :3

[They hurt Flubby.]

I agree

flubby... ;^;

anyways looking back at the other posts I think what's wrong with it is that the forearms are too thick and her chin placement is a bit off. I also think her head seems a bit detached from her body, like it's too far away.
Although I think the shading is really excellent and so are the colors :)

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks~
i do agree that the arm and chin are not good

[Puppeteer: Page 2]

Make more use of space!

there's no size limit to pictures on newgrounds. I'd really like to see much more on one page then just two speech bubbles. that's more like one panel to a comic. even if it was only updated once per month I think i'd rather see it with more action in it.

anyways the picture is good but I think the puppeteers torso is a bit off.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

well, i kind of am only using 2 or 3 boxes for the first few pages, because that's when characters are inttoduced and that usually calls for full body pics

you like looking at her boobs

[Page 1]

FIRST!!

anyways not much is happening yet but nice job on attracting the viewers immediate attention with an instant feeling of evil and foreboding death. However I think the colors are a bit to vibrant to be a horror scene. I think it will be better in black and white.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

its only colored for the first two pags... page #1... :3

[Ruu is with the puppeteer.]

pretty amazingly epic.

I must say, this is a really amazing pic. However I think that the puppeteer is too covered by Ruu's wing (also you have no nose) and the hand of the puppeteer is just a bit too small. but still. the layout is awesome, the details are f***ing amazing and the concept is pretty cool. 10/10 from me.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

wooh! glad you liked it!

[Last Laugh]

Pretty F***ing Awesome!

I love how it ties into one of your former drawings, the Moon Ritual, and how the succubus looks like the girl in that pic, only possessed by an evil spirit. And the statues in the background help tie the connection with that.
The only problem I have with this pic is the proportions seem a bit off like with the hand on the statues and the hand of Azalambel are a bit too big. But that's understandable with the crazy perspective you got going there. 10/10 from me.

ZeWitchKid responds:

yes, its an effect commonly used in marvel comics, its calle dforeshotting, as surprising as it is every line of perspective fits, but since the angle of view is too wide and large ( a normal human eye cant focus entirely on that pic, it create an illusion of exxagerated depth and vertigo, wich is what i was looking for^^

as for the ties, thoses characters are from a comic im makin, although it isnt finished yet Oo

[Love this Blood.]

It doesn't look like she's wearing a shirt :O

anyways, I like it but I think you should try out some different fonts. Also the white speech bubble seems to stick out a bit too much. Maybe color it in a shade of gray to prevent that.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

she's not wearing a shirt....
(tee-hee)
hm... i might fix the speech bubble and stuff

[Another]

lol!

It's funny but instead of "paint drying" it should say, "tone-death monkey with a wig and a microphone!" I feel that would be more accurate and harder to spot the difference :D

[Sitting with Blossoms]

princess

is she the damsel in distress like peach or the kick-ass kinda princess like zelda? (hooray! video game references!)

Sorrygirl99 responds:

uuhhh neither :3

[Stop Freaking out!]

good.

But instead of saying, "well, if you haven't noticed, we are ghosts too.... idiot." (that's kinda plain and boring) she should've said, "NO SHIT SHERLOCK!!" funny, gets the same message across, and you can't beat the classics. or at least something more spontaneous then what you have now.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

fine... tomorrow i will do that