Sprite-harvester's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ODM II issue 13]

perspective fail

in the panel with the guy that gets his head cut off from the box and the girl whos walking away, the guy with his head cut off's hand is behind the girl's hand, implying that the guy is extremely huge and the girl is incredibly tiny.

well in spite of that you still get a 9 out of 10 from me because your art style is freaking sweet!

And for those of you complaining, Notice how he gives you the text that turned out too small in the author's comments.

TheManofSteal13 responds:

I didn't had the chance to thank you enough for pointing these things out.
Sometimes viewers tend to try so hard to find the errors and not see the solution.

Hopefully the next one will be more enjoyable you all and critique free.

[Maeghan from Fantasy High]

lol

nice bird depiction.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks.....

[Peach's Brawl]

cool

This pic is nice and peach can be a formidable foe sometimes. However, in my opinion, they really worsened her in brawl. she was so much better in melee. But that just may be my opinion. what do you think?

[Lil Talen]

nice

this is very well drawn. nice shading and I like the clothes. Big hat ftw!

[CHIBI LAND]

chibi

lol. Chibis are always funny looking to me. and that miracle character looks interesting. Is she supposed to be an elf?

ultimatefan responds:

actually no...
by the way she looks in chibi form i don't blame u for thinking that...XD
I originally designed her as a half-wolf demon (almost the style of Koga from Inuyasha) but because she lacks a tail, (which is true for both chibi and normal version) she looks like an elf...lol
I'm planning on uploading more Miracle pics if I can actually find any in my sketchbooks (cause even though I invented her, i don't really draw her that much unless i'm thinking of a new scene in my book! lol)

["Sam!! Stop Burping!!"]

what?

I make you burp?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

nooo
sprite
the drink.....

[Me looking like an anime thing]

[review]

Is well drawn but the colorful things in her hair just don't really look to realistic. Perhaps you should make it so that they're thicker giving it a more full look and you should probably shade them with the hair so it doesn't stand out as much.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

they are just random strands...
to show color :3

[A thing from the Clouds]

[REVIEW]

I like it! Clouds are very inspiring. I once saw: a homicidal frog with a knife in hand, A cat in a rocket ship, a dog eating a fly, a lion on fire, and some other things I can't remember all within the same general area. Clouds are just awesome.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

I can top that...
I once saw: A dolphin eating a hotdog, santa with a tree in his hand, a dog with a bone, my mom!!!, a lion getting shot in the eye, some dude on the phone, a foot, a high heel shoe, a butt, some type of turtle-rabbit thing, the dude of that picture i took, an angel, andddddd kirby... i know... weird
and i saw all of that in the clouds :3

[Layna]

This is one of your better works!

This one is very well drawn. And what is this "Princess Kikia" thing? How many stories are you making!? Why does she only have one eye? Why does she have a necklace with her soul in it? Why must you make me have so many questions?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

ok, princess Kikia was an old story i did last year. I am only making a few...
she has one eye because she tried to make her friend come back to life, but then lost her eye.... well cursed her eye... so she covers it with her hair....
i dont make you have a lot of questions... you just dont know a lot :P